There's a lot of info out there on pitching VCs and what the deck should include but not so much on pitching angels for smaller seed stage investments, so:
* What is the right time to pitch an angel? Is it after the alpha but before traction or after a good amount of traction?
* What should a pitch deck for angels include?
* It's never too early to pitch an angel. IMHO, angels are generally comfortable investing before you have real traction - smart angels have told me that they invest in people, not ideas. So, the takeaway is that you want to start talking to angels early - let them know what you're up to and, if there's mutual interest, you'll get to the next level.
* Your deck should include the Kawasaki 10: http://blog.guykawasaki.com/2005/12/the_102030_rule.html Though, don't whip your deck out on the first date -- I've had more success by having informal coffee/lunch meetings first. If they want to know more, that's when you send them the deck.
* When in doubt, remember this: "Ask for advice and you may eventually get money. Ask for money and you'll often get advice."
Finally, if you want to continue the conversation offline, I'd be happy to help -- feel free to email me.