I enjoyed being able to clearly learn what your product does in 4 easy steps.
However, step 1 (No registration required) is not a step. It told me what not to do, which is confusing. I recommend making it "how it works" in 3 steps, with a bubble or callout saying "no registration required!"
Also, step 4 made me think I should buy the books in the store, which is exactly what you don't want them to do... The icon (books in shopping cart) and words "Purchase your books" don't clearly tell me to drive home empty handed.
I like the concept, would definitely check it out if I was more of a frugal shopper, but I often just buy in store to have the instant gratification.
congrats on getting this out there! That's a great accomplishment in itself
Good points on the copy. 3 steps + a 'no reg' badge or something makes sense.
One point of fonefu beyond just the cost savings is the ability to keep a record of books you might be interested in buying later - things you lookup are stored on fonefu.com or your friendfeed.
However, step 1 (No registration required) is not a step. It told me what not to do, which is confusing. I recommend making it "how it works" in 3 steps, with a bubble or callout saying "no registration required!"
Also, step 4 made me think I should buy the books in the store, which is exactly what you don't want them to do... The icon (books in shopping cart) and words "Purchase your books" don't clearly tell me to drive home empty handed.
I like the concept, would definitely check it out if I was more of a frugal shopper, but I often just buy in store to have the instant gratification.
congrats on getting this out there! That's a great accomplishment in itself