Not for me. It's readable, but my brain has to do more work. When I get to "money-rather" my brain trips up slightly, and then I'm confused until the next dash, then I go back and figure it out.

All possible and dealt with in under a second, but in the first example with the longer dash my brain recognises a parenthesis and I take a little "breath pause" before carrying on.

Also consider, that eye movement is not always linear from left to right. But I agree, brain has to do more work and it is slightly confusing.

I can read it, but it definitely trips me up.