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cafard on Dec 27, 2011 | parent | context | favorite | on: 'TSA Arrests Me for Using the Fourth Amendment as ...

Quite. But now rewrite the article to take out reduce it to the facts not including her psychological/physiological state (effects of handcuffs on wrists OK, relevant; perspiration rate not really.) Does it read differently?

MoreMoschops on Dec 27, 2011 [–]

"But now rewrite the article to take out reduce it to the facts not including her psychological/physiological state (effects of handcuffs on wrists OK, relevant; perspiration rate not really.) "

If you rewrite this to make sense, I'll give it a go :)

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